http://lusarka.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lusarka.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ne_goya 2007-03-04 01:34 pm (UTC)

Как - еще не знаю. Но строчка "Я не вечен, ты тоже не вечен" выбивается. И с отточиями переборщил слегка, я бы только после "тормоза" оставила, а в остальных местах запятые.
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